Saturday, March 14, 2009

sweeter

Sure is nice to see you
You look good these days
Talking's not so easy
I wish I had more to say

And you turn away, and I wonder
Was it something I said?
And what can I do to make this change?

Your smile is a sweetness (or sweetener?)
It really makes my day
And you get sweeter and sweeter
In every possible way

Then you turn away, and I wonder
Was it something I said?
And what can I do to make this change?

-julie darion

1 comment:

Luminata said...

My friend, poetry, like beauty, is in the eye of the beholder. It is all about feelings. And once you let go of all the rules about writing, and let it flow out of you, then you will know that you have written something good. And trust me, it's enough that you know it. Don't let anyone else tell you!

Cheers! :)